THE CREEK NEAR MY OLD SCHOOL
THE CREEK NEAR MY OLD SCHOOL WAS USUAL ENOUGH IT HAD A CREEK ,FIVE GRAPE TREES,STICKY YUCK MUD EVEN A TREE STANDING THE AREA THAT I ALWAYS WENT UNDER,ME AND MY FRIENDS DID WHAT WE DID BEST-PICK THE GRAPES OF THE TREES AND STAND IN THE YUCK MUD LIKE WE WERE GOING THROUGH A BLACK DARK CAVE WITH A WEAK TORCH WALKING OR SWAM DOING NOTHING IMPORTANT.
I like your story and the way you described the way you walked through the mud!
ReplyDeleteBrendan
Room 9
I like how you said sticky yuck mud
ReplyDeleteBrayden
Room 9